Thursday, February 21, 2013

Show Not Tell

I’m jogging towards the the try line and I’m thinking in my head “Come on pass the ball to me” but as soon she passes it, my defender tags me. So I think to myself “How can I get a try without getting tagged”. Its my turn again and its my last attempt “Oh No!”. I’m jogging towards the try line again and as soon as I get the ball I sprint to the finish line....... fortunately it was a TRY!! YAY!!

1 comment:

Makerita said...

Hey Mary,

I love some of the vocab in this text of yours. It's awesome to see that your trying your best in your writing. It is very complex. Keep up the great work.

Yours Sincerely,