Show Not Tell

I’m jogging towards the the try line and I’m thinking in my head “Come on pass the ball to me” but as soon she passes it, my defender tags me. So I think to myself “How can I get a try without getting tagged”. Its my turn again and its my last attempt “Oh No!”. I’m jogging towards the try line again and as soon as I get the ball I sprint to the finish line....... fortunately it was a TRY!! YAY!!